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PostSubject: Matsumoto, Rangiku.   Wed Nov 07, 2007 7:16 pm

Out Of Character

Name/Alias/Nickname: Candy

Age: ( Required) 19

Screen Name: (lowercase please) her haineko

Time Zone: EST

Role-playing experience: 4+ years

Average amount of time online per day: Daily.

Have you ever Rped Bleach before? (Describe briefly): Yes but never in a SL.

Have you been in any other Bleach role-playing groups? (List them): No.

What is Hantarou's Bankai ?: He doesn't have one. =/

Are you applying for CC (Canon Character) or OC (Original Character)?: OC

( If CC, please check the roster before applying)

What is your character? (Shinigami, Quincy, Human, Arrancar, Hollow, Vaizard): Shinigami.

In Character

Family Name: Matsumoto

First Name: Rangiku

Age: Appears to be in her 20s.

Height: 5'7" 1/2

Weight: 120 LBS.

Division [Shinigami]: 10th Division

Type [Arrancar/Hollow]: N/A

Personality (Basic description): Rangiku is your loveable and free spirit woman! She has a carefree attitude and she enjoys spending her time pampering herself. She lacks doing her paperwork but deep down, she is caring.

Physical Appearance: Rangiku appears to have strawberry-blonde hair with ice blue eyes. She is tall for a woman and the most infamous and well known part of her body is her large breasts. She wears a pink sash along with her uniform with her division banner along her white sash around her waist. She wields her zanpakuto on her lower back with her guard being that of a cat's eye.

History/ Biography: Not much is known about Rangiku. It is clear that Rangiku may have been injured critically though a former captain, Gin Ichimaru, has "saved" her from near death. It is said that Rangiku cannot remember much of her past and her brithday was given by Ichimaru on the day he met her. Sihe has been a lieutenant for quite sometime, which is said that she may have been one even before her captain became the captain of 10th Division.

Zanpakutoh [Shinigami, Arrancar] (Include possible shikai to be obtained): Rangiku's Zanpakotu's guard resembles a cat's eye. Hence her command for shikai, "Growl, Haineko." This release gives Rangiku the ability to let the blade of her Zanpakuto to turn into ash. Rangiku has yet to discover her Bankai form. However, just like Rangiku, Haineko is lazy, moody, and selfish.

Character image: ( if any )

Sample Post:
W[hat to do? That's what the strawberry-blonde woman would think once she wakes up. Oh? Yes, Rangiku Matsumoto had been avoiding much time from doing any sort of work within her division. She is, afterall, the fukataichou of the 10th Division. Like every other party animal, Rangiku suffered the effects of too much sake. The night before, drinking to her hearts content for the love of her cheerful and free spirit. And with that, came for the price. Matsumoto had laid upon the comfortable couch within the 10th Division office, sleeping away. That is, until noises occured just outside of the office. A yawn and a groan, Rangiku had finally got herself to sit up from the nap she ever so love. Infront of her would be the table. Ah, yes. That table itself had a good surprise for her. Several blinks and she would notice it. Moutains of paperwork. It wasn't something she would look forward too. Both elbows came to rest upon her lap, allowing herself to bend forward a bit to see the stands of paper. She had closed her eyes briefly to let out a heavy exhale. What would be a good excuse this time?
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Join date : 2007-11-03
Age : 32
Location : North Carolina

PostSubject: Re: Matsumoto, Rangiku.   Wed Nov 07, 2007 9:22 pm

You seem to have the character personality and concept down pretty well.

I will ask that you watch your sentence structure, however, as some of your sentences were fragments and it disrupted the flow of your post. They're just minor grammatical errors, but they can make it hard to follow during real-time Rp. It's not a disqualifier, but I'm hoping you'll take the chance to work on it and improve it (which will also be good for school projects).

You're very to the point with your writing style. This isn't a negative at all, but rather something I wanted to compliment you on. It's good to see a blend of different writing styles in our SL.

I do have one minor correction on word usage, however. The appropriate Japanese term for what is loosely translated to "lieutenant" is fukutaichou. Fuka actually means shark. This is a common error that I've seen, though, and definitely does not count against you.

Thank you for your time and effor on the application. I'm willing to give my approval. The other admins should weigh in their opinions, as well.

- Bitchninja-taichou
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